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Comment on The Birdcage 38 by Bryan

Bryan — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 00:30:47 +0000

Thank you! That’s such a great comment – I feel flattered!

Comment on The Many Deaths of Samish 5.29 by Bryan

Bryan — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 00:27:40 +0000

Thanks very much! Only 3 more chapters to go!

Comment on The Birdcage 38 by TheHop

TheHop — Wed, 18 Mar 2009 20:35:18 +0000

I don’t know where to begin. It’s sensuous and well-imagined and a hell of a lot of fun. One of my favourite things was how you made it an imperfect fantasy—the awkward bit when he goes to the toilet, his nervousness in public. I laughed out loud at the internet cunnilingus comment. Then in the end there’s the give-and-take as they grow close, and the tender moment when he talks her to sleep… Maybe everyone who writes erotic fiction does it with such skill and emotional range, but I doubt there are many who can top your imagination and understanding. Bravo!

Comment on The Many Deaths of Samish 5.29 by TheHop

TheHop — Wed, 18 Mar 2009 20:16:57 +0000

Outstanding story. There’s so much to love about it. The way you leave the fate of Red to the reader’s imagination comes to mind now, but the core thing is how well you show the predatory excitement, and the build-up to it. Magnificent work.

Comment on Cheating Life – 1.1 by Bryan

Bryan — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 15:45:20 +0000

Thanks!

Comment on Cheating Life – 1.1 by mystyletto

mystyletto — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 14:03:50 +0000

I really enjoy reading your posts. have blogrolled it ;o)

Comment on Cheating Life – 7.1 by Bryan

Bryan — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 13:46:46 +0000

Excellent! I’m glad you’re enjoying it! I’d love to read what you two come up with!